CHARACTER
Stay Awakeby Megan Goldin

Detective Jack Lavelle

Detective Jack Lavelle

Quick Facts

A seasoned homicide detective with fifteen years on the job, Detective Jack Lavelle enters the case as the reluctant senior partner to Darcy Halliday. First seen at the crime scene of Ted Cole, he arrives in jeans and a brown leather bomber, scanning the scene with the jaded focus of a veteran. Key relationships include Halliday, his captain Ken Clarke, and fellow detective Jerry Krause; off the clock, he’s a devoted father who keeps his personal life guarded.

Who They Are

Lavelle is the procedural backbone of the investigation—blunt, methodical, and allergic to speculation. He personifies the old-guard detective who believes the case lives or dies on chain-of-custody and lab results. Yet the novel positions him not as a relic, but as a necessary counterweight whose skepticism must evolve. His arc reframes cynicism as wisdom in recovery: he learns to hold evidence and instinct in the same hand.

Personality & Traits

Lavelle’s defining quality is his pragmatic skepticism. He starts as a lone wolf whose trust is earned only by facts—then gradually learns that good instincts are themselves a kind of evidence when vetted rigorously. The novel uses his guarded demeanor to highlight how care, not warmth, can sustain a partnership: he is fair even when he doubts, and he apologizes when he’s wrong.

  • Experienced and jaded: Fifteen years in homicide means he rarely flinches; he assumes the most probable explanation until disproved, a posture that protects him from chasing red herrings and from emotional burnout.
  • Loner by habit: He resists partnerships and precinct small talk. Being assigned to Halliday threatens his independence and forces him to articulate—then revise—his methods.
  • Direct and pragmatic: He cuts past pleasantries to process, impatient with anything that slows evidence flow; he pushes labs for quick results and prefers straightforward BOLOs to speculative canvasses.
  • Skeptical but fair: Though initially dismissive of uncorroborated theories, he listens, weighs, and—crucially—revises. His apology to Halliday in Chapter 36 marks a shift from supervisory distance to genuine collaboration.
  • Dedicated father and cop: The job consumes him, but he still carves out time with his son. That boundary tempers his cynicism, suggesting his hard shell protects a clear moral center.
  • “Looks like the job”: Tightly cropped dark hair, stubble, deep-set ink-blue eyes; a “jaded gaze” that signals miles on the odometer. The bomber jacket and jeans at his first scene fit the part: utilitarian, unshowy, all function.

Character Journey

Lavelle begins as the quintessential lone veteran, skeptical of a temporary transfer disrupting his rhythm. His initial posture toward Halliday is managerial and cool; he’s evaluating her as much as the case. As they pursue leads—including those implicating Liv Reese—he tests Halliday’s theories against his evidentiary standard, and she repeatedly meets the bar. The apology in Chapter 36 cracks the shell; by the time he insists on the grimy, old-school trash search that lands the bloody knife (Chapter 49), their methods have braided together. In the end, his decision to vouch for her with Captain Clarke (Chapter 65) completes a quiet but profound shift: from solitary investigator to mentor-partner who recognizes that rigor and openness are not opposites.

Key Relationships

  • Detective Darcy Halliday: What begins as a forced pairing becomes a complementary partnership—his procedural muscle to her fresh pattern-spotting. Lavelle challenges her theories but makes room for them; she meets his standards, and he adjusts his. Their respect is earned in both directions, turning evaluation into alliance.
  • Captain Ken Clarke: Clarke trusts Lavelle’s judgment enough to make him the informal gatekeeper for Halliday’s future. Lavelle pushes back when asked to “spy,” signaling his ethical line: he’ll assess, not surveil. The relationship underscores his credibility inside the department.
  • Detective Jerry Krause: Lavelle’s disdain for Krause’s shortcuts clarifies his own code. By defining himself against Krause’s laziness, he’s framed as relentless and thorough, the kind of detective who will dig through garbage rather than cut a corner.

Defining Moments

Lavelle’s turning points are quiet, procedural pivots that reveal his evolving values.

  • Arrival at the Crime Scene (Chapter 5): “The captain wants me to work with you on this case... As partners.” The announcement sets the conflict: independence versus collaboration. His tone establishes authority; the partnership tests whether that authority can share space.
  • The BOLO Disagreement and Apology (Chapter 36): He snaps when Halliday questions issuing a BOLO for Liv; then he apologizes. The apology is the hinge—admitting error without losing stature—and it formalizes mutual trust.
  • “Garbage work” pays off (Chapter 49): Lavelle insists on searching the trash cans outside Liv’s old apartment. The discovery of the bloody knife proves his instincts for unglamorous legwork and models evidence-first persistence for Halliday.
  • Vouching to the Captain (Chapter 65): He volunteers to be Halliday’s referee for a permanent slot. Public endorsement is risk; offering it shows he’s moved from evaluator to advocate, sealing his arc.
  • Refusing to Spy: When pressed to monitor Halliday informally, he balks. Drawing that line clarifies his ethics: transparency over clandestine oversight, even under command pressure.

Essential Quotes

“The captain wants me to work with you on this case... As partners.” This line frames the novel’s central professional tension. Lavelle’s reluctant phrasing signals his resistance to change, while the ellipsis captures his hesitance—a pause before surrendering autonomy that he will later reclaim as shared authority.

“Homicide investigations are exponentially harder when the identity of the victim is unknown.” A credo that explains his process. Lavelle reduces chaos by anchoring to verifiable facts; the mathy “exponentially” reveals his preference for measurable difficulty over narrative speculation.

“You’re asking me to spy on her? It’s not my style. You know that.” Here, Lavelle defines ethical boundaries within a hierarchical system. He’ll assess a colleague’s performance, but covert surveillance violates his professional code and the trust a functional partnership requires.

“I shouldn’t have lashed out at you. I was out of line.” A rare, clean apology that models accountability. By naming the behavior and the breach, he restores equilibrium and invites Halliday into an equal footing, accelerating their shift from oversight to collaboration.

“Garbage is a window to a person’s soul. A bit like their internet browsing history, but a whole lot smellier.” Grim humor masks a principle: truth hides in the mundane. Lavelle’s willingness to do the “smelly” work elevates method over glamour, reminding us that answers often sit where pride refuses to look.